please read the uploaded file. thanks. This is the feedback that i got from the
please read the uploaded file. thanks. This is the feedback that i got from the outline done Comments, this is a great topic to explore, and you have very interesting key points to help support your argument. For your thesis statement, perhaps you can clarify “the information” that is missing to strengthen what you will argue. Also, you could include why it is necessary to have a workable plan for gun control. In your second key argument, what are these gun-related problems? I invite you to consider how you can generate a thesis that recognizes the problems of the lack of firearm use and why it is necessary. Your annotated bibliographies clearly show your engagement with the sources and how they connect to your topic. I look forward to seeing how your infographic develops. Good work.

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